tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post341585377637099596..comments2024-01-03T02:23:24.126-06:00Comments on bigger than a lasagna: 3WW Submission: Once Upon A Time There Was a GirlHeidihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-31807903302721710912013-02-24T11:34:11.698-06:002013-02-24T11:34:11.698-06:00Good morning Paige! Thank you for visiting and com...Good morning Paige! Thank you for visiting and commenting. I would love to have you back here, and look forward to visiting your blog again too. Also, thank you for the follow (I'm now in the double digits and it's going straight to my head!)Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-20924304278448902342013-02-23T11:49:45.994-06:002013-02-23T11:49:45.994-06:00Enjoyed your prose, Heidi. Wonderful fairy tale. I...Enjoyed your prose, Heidi. Wonderful fairy tale. I will be back<br />to read moreAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-45056221664330196482013-02-22T23:10:16.871-06:002013-02-22T23:10:16.871-06:00Hi Nico! Thanks for stopping by and commenting. I&...Hi Nico! Thanks for stopping by and commenting. I'm glad you liked it. And, you are correct, computer technology is the Devil! <br /><br />Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-17404119435067992042013-02-22T23:06:12.058-06:002013-02-22T23:06:12.058-06:00Hi Jazzbumpa! Thank you for reading and for the aw...Hi Jazzbumpa! Thank you for reading and for the awesome comment. I'm glad that I was able to nail the fairy-tale vibe and tell the story. Also, if "valid" was the only word that you noticed, then I'm super stoked (and apparently regressing to my 15 year old self.) By the end, I did not want to see the word "decided" ever again.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-16243567767043030842013-02-22T22:57:24.969-06:002013-02-22T22:57:24.969-06:00Hi Jae, nice to see you here again. Thanks for the...Hi Jae, nice to see you here again. Thanks for the visit and here's to all clever maidens.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-87231384550300181532013-02-22T22:55:22.762-06:002013-02-22T22:55:22.762-06:00Thanks Sheilagh! Welcome to the lasagna! Hope to s...Thanks Sheilagh! Welcome to the lasagna! Hope to see you again.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-65464900321179426562013-02-22T13:54:48.839-06:002013-02-22T13:54:48.839-06:00I've been out of the loop for a few weeks, but...I've been out of the loop for a few weeks, but I'm glad I stopped in--this was a fun read! Sestina is a tough form, definitely good to stretch the abilities. <br /><br />I've had the same problem in the past with pasting stuff onto Blogger. I'm not very tech savvy (in fact, I think computer technology is the Devil!) so I usually end up just cursing and deleting it. Anyway, nicely done.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-77864385792916307882013-02-21T13:00:56.134-06:002013-02-21T13:00:56.134-06:00I didn't realize I was reading a sestina, and ...I didn't realize I was reading a sestina, and wondered why the word "valid" kept reappearing. It's a really difficult form to work in, and I find myself lacking the patience.<br /><br />Telling a coherent story in sestina form is quite an accomplishment, and it had a fairy-tale feel to it, as well.<br /><br />Cheers!<br />JzBJazzbumpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-85668437982110804382013-02-20T20:29:01.024-06:002013-02-20T20:29:01.024-06:00Thanks Laurie. I love sestinas, but did take a cou...Thanks Laurie. I love sestinas, but did take a couple of liberties here. I think I may try again later.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-54770862211587507192013-02-20T20:26:49.898-06:002013-02-20T20:26:49.898-06:00Thanks, and I don't mind critiques. I am rusty...Thanks, and I don't mind critiques. I am rusty, although if it's too much, maybe an email...gives me a chance to blame it on my 3 yr old distracting me in private. I have already done some tweaking, but not enough to make the miller's daughter angry.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-84674276008098624912013-02-20T17:55:28.377-06:002013-02-20T17:55:28.377-06:00Yeah for you, tackling a sestina like you have... ...Yeah for you, tackling a sestina like you have... and it turned out well! Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-54631715913112267682013-02-20T16:45:33.572-06:002013-02-20T16:45:33.572-06:00Yes, transferring work to Blogger is a pain someti...Yes, transferring work to Blogger is a pain sometimes. For all the fun I was itching to do a bit of editing. No doubt you will play with it a bit more as you read it over...but don't upset the Miller's daughter!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-70949183062835038402013-02-20T15:29:56.369-06:002013-02-20T15:29:56.369-06:00LOL great story.LOL great story.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.com