tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post8243452856576206836..comments2024-01-03T02:23:24.126-06:00Comments on bigger than a lasagna: ErosHeidihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-69853598948398522192013-05-03T14:50:39.472-05:002013-05-03T14:50:39.472-05:00Excellent Heidi - you passionate thing you! :o]
I...Excellent Heidi - you passionate thing you! :o]<br /><br />I remember the good old days when lust was intermingled with love...<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-14775543159443075542013-05-03T10:09:39.660-05:002013-05-03T10:09:39.660-05:00I'm grateful for the opportunity to revisit my...I'm grateful for the opportunity to revisit my earlier writing. I can see why you thought to choose this poem for your link. Rich imagery for passionate subjects--enjoyed it very much.Tawnya Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16192389666581761739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-55796678805773390872013-04-30T14:59:37.575-05:002013-04-30T14:59:37.575-05:00Heidi,
Is this about narcissistic or erotic love? ...Heidi,<br />Is this about narcissistic or erotic love? I mean the arrows sending, the sand to glass, the silvering, all the elements of a mirror with which to better fall in love with oneself. Denial of that obsession, self possession desired, fear that it will be your death or the death of more acceptable love relationships, finally the confession that paradise would satisfy those auto-erotic desires. Then perhaps I'm showing my mythological ignorance and it's all the same thing.Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-70290357899950205232013-04-30T13:37:34.955-05:002013-04-30T13:37:34.955-05:00Thanks! I'll go check it out.Thanks! I'll go check it out.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-60070230466250198862013-04-30T13:36:31.004-05:002013-04-30T13:36:31.004-05:00Thanks Madeleine!Thanks Madeleine!Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-21778659523613093762013-04-30T13:36:01.163-05:002013-04-30T13:36:01.163-05:00Thank you...the way I used it here was to group tw...Thank you...the way I used it here was to group two or more words closely together that begin with the same consonant. It's a bunch of fun to write one liners using the same letter for each word...there were a lot of those around this poem in my notebook.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-22964635386997768142013-04-30T13:33:31.315-05:002013-04-30T13:33:31.315-05:00You crack me up!
You crack me up!<br />Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-27122575409888113412013-04-30T11:11:44.533-05:002013-04-30T11:11:44.533-05:00Stormcat had a good idea for the prompt explained ...Stormcat had a good idea for the prompt explained in the comments you are most welcome to add another submission if you want to have a go at itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-52828588660846825432013-04-30T10:42:02.136-05:002013-04-30T10:42:02.136-05:00Thanks. And thanks for making me chuckle too.
I f...Thanks. And thanks for making me chuckle too.<br />I fink that it is possible to f-f-f-find a meffod to do alliterate the fingamabobs.<br />Have another nice day..Lovable Derekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03831795918578061371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-84744593431699456062013-04-30T01:20:07.228-05:002013-04-30T01:20:07.228-05:00Really well done!Really well done!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-44131050768641566842013-04-29T19:44:03.242-05:002013-04-29T19:44:03.242-05:00Nicely done, Heidi! But...I'm not sure if I li...Nicely done, Heidi! But...I'm not sure if I like alliteration; mainly, because I'm not sure what it is!marblesinmypockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2013/04/29/spirit-guard/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-31876113811810684862013-04-29T06:23:30.051-05:002013-04-29T06:23:30.051-05:00Thank you! I like alliteration and expletives, and...Thank you! I like alliteration and expletives, and if I can alliterate the expletives...even better. :) Glad you stopped by, and have a nice day too!Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-89163838782900808402013-04-29T06:20:49.134-05:002013-04-29T06:20:49.134-05:00Thank you, I really like your blog, and this was ...Thank you, I really like your blog, and this was a good experience. I had originally intended to mix in some of my older pieces with new ones for this blog, but I have only done it occasionally.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-87309766910402921722013-04-29T06:18:17.546-05:002013-04-29T06:18:17.546-05:00Thank you, and thanks for stopping by.Thank you, and thanks for stopping by.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-16105282118313395192013-04-29T06:17:07.335-05:002013-04-29T06:17:07.335-05:00Thank you, I am glad that you liked it. I read thr...Thank you, I am glad that you liked it. I read through some other pieces when I dug this out. It was a hoot.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-85909755267763949002013-04-29T02:19:45.863-05:002013-04-29T02:19:45.863-05:00Cool. Nice use of alliteration - and expletives t...Cool. Nice use of alliteration - and expletives too. Very cool.<br />Have a nice day.Lovable Derekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03831795918578061371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-42643404928929782282013-04-28T23:12:23.360-05:002013-04-28T23:12:23.360-05:00This is fantastic seriously wow! I love alliterati...This is fantastic seriously wow! I love alliteration too. Thank you so much for participating and for your kind words =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-21959378169927023412013-04-28T19:06:05.514-05:002013-04-28T19:06:05.514-05:00It's better than some stuff I've come acro...It's better than some stuff I've come across recently, I didn't go too far back, thanks for sharing.rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-6735424005674637932013-04-28T18:29:31.122-05:002013-04-28T18:29:31.122-05:00It's nice to look back and say, "hey. tha...It's nice to look back and say, "hey. that's not bad." actually it is very good and you have a right to feel as you do...it's damn good.George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-83943793043422161102013-04-28T17:11:47.719-05:002013-04-28T17:11:47.719-05:00I was gleefully morbid in my early twenties. I had...I was gleefully morbid in my early twenties. I had mostly resolved a terrible fear of the dark that plagued most of my childhood, and sort of embraced it. As you can see by this, I have always had an urge to discuss what I have just written. I am glad that you like it. This was also one of my more coherent, and less political or x-rated (or both) pieces. Thanks for the visit.<br />Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-34823007473790715872013-04-28T17:04:20.824-05:002013-04-28T17:04:20.824-05:00Hey Brian, it's okay to laugh...no weapons. An...Hey Brian, it's okay to laugh...no weapons. And yes, the black man is death, I was probably thinking about the grim reaper. Yep. Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-3331349774261544312013-04-28T16:38:36.215-05:002013-04-28T16:38:36.215-05:00Eros/arrows, cool wordplay. As a whole a little bi...Eros/arrows, cool wordplay. As a whole a little bit of the dark side coming out at 21? Probably just beginning to contemplate the complexities of what it means to possess something/someone. The neat thing about reading your poems is that I get to read your commentary, too. Great stuff. I don't think I'd be able to share much of what I thought when I was 21.JayGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15817675980200134668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1534630994488293905.post-24287385155982697982013-04-28T16:04:00.244-05:002013-04-28T16:04:00.244-05:00haha...um...guess i better say nice things in case...haha...um...guess i better say nice things in case you have a weapon eh? smiles...nah i would anyway...cool verse...i wonder does the black man then refer to death? death and sex def are interesting partners....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com