Wednesday, June 4, 2014

Fine

just when everything

seems

okay...

I am overwhelmed

by the bland lonliness

of my life.

thedis tance bet we e n m y h u s b a n d a  n  d  I   s   t   r   e   t   c  h   e   s


e     v     e     n      f      u       r        t         h            e           r.


I am 

sitting

in a
 room

with two lovely

small

children

and

I

am

all

alone...

when a second ago

everything seemed



                    fine.

heidi
written 6/4/14

blah. one of those get it out of me so I can fucking enjoy watching my son surround himself with all of his toys on the kitchen floor.

8 comments:

  1. You express your feeling so lucidly here. I get it.

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  2. I hate that distance...I have experienced it...You have written it so well.

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  3. hugs. hard place of being.
    long distance relationships in the same house.

    nice play with structure.

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  4. Hugs lovely Heidi.
    In a similar lonely place myself - so much apologies for not emailing (yet).
    Love ya!
    Anna :o] (or maybe :o[)

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  5. You sum up so well what I imagine quite a lot of people go through but many can't/don't put it into words.

    Another thing I like is that the distance could be anything from a marriage-on-the-rocks crisis to you just miss him while he's at work. Whatever it might be, it still seems far.

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  6. I like how you embraced the ambiguity of the situation and roll with it.

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  7. Hugs. Hard place to be in. Hang in there.

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  8. I certainly hope that this is fictional in nature, and if not, I hope that you and yours find peace soon.

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