This is creative writing exercise. Most of the work posted is unfinished, so comments and critiques are appreciated. My email is below in case you would rather send me your thoughts privately. Thanks for visiting, and I hope you enjoy!
Wednesday, July 22, 2015
Entropy
One piece
Missing and my
Work falls apart while I
Nurse the gaping hole that was left
Behind.
heidi
written: 7 / 22 / 15
Feeling writey, and a little sad, and working up to write some pissed off pieces.
You've captured the expansiveness of loss in less than 20 words. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteI certainly empathize with your eloquent words here.
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