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Wednesday, October 8, 2014
In The Darkness
movement
at the corner
of my eye triggering
fear, they are out and they want to
eat me
heidi
written 10/08/14
Also inspired by Marina'sdVerse prompt, but probably not what she meant.(not linked)
Now that I've watched 3 Forensic Files and read this, I have to turn out all the lights, go through the house closing the blinds, and hope to God there is no one with a clown face standing outside the window.
The monsters under our bed! This poem evokes emotions to childhood in very few words. Well done!
ReplyDeleteNow that I've watched 3 Forensic Files and read this, I have to turn out all the lights, go through the house closing the blinds, and hope to God there is no one with a clown face standing outside the window.
ReplyDeleteOh this makes me ant to peek around the corner before my toes get there
ReplyDeletegrab a weapon and don't let em get any bites! smiles...
ReplyDeleteYikes! And they like lasagna! Take care! Thanks for the smile. k .
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