His voice
is
erotic-amphetimine
I n j e c t i n g
napalm daylilly-desire
E
r
a
d
i
c
a
t
i
n
g
all
logic-vomit
Wilting the boldness-bearer
of my resolve.
Burning me with the
ice-blue-fire
of
his
gaze.
My body
trembles
with well-being
and
the sweet
ache
of time-halting.
All I do is wait for the freedom-flame
That is the caress of his fiery stare.
heidi
written 3/21/14
for dVerse Meeting the Bar
Bjorn introduces us to Kennings in this Meeting the Bar at dVerse. They look like so much fun, and I think I did it all wrong. Oh well. Happy World Poetry Day anyway! Make sure you go by and check out the other poems using Kennings. You won't regret it!
is
erotic-amphetimine
I n j e c t i n g
napalm daylilly-desire
E
r
a
d
i
c
a
t
i
n
g
all
logic-vomit
Wilting the boldness-bearer
of my resolve.
Burning me with the
ice-blue-fire
of
his
gaze.
My body
trembles
with well-being
and
the sweet
ache
of time-halting.
All I do is wait for the freedom-flame
That is the caress of his fiery stare.
heidi
written 3/21/14
for dVerse Meeting the Bar
Bjorn introduces us to Kennings in this Meeting the Bar at dVerse. They look like so much fun, and I think I did it all wrong. Oh well. Happy World Poetry Day anyway! Make sure you go by and check out the other poems using Kennings. You won't regret it!
napalm daylilly-desire
ReplyDeleteha....whew...i need another shower....this is quite hot....
sweat-ache of time halting....for sure..
Thanks Brian! I like this poem better after being away and coming back to it.
DeleteWow, such a brilliant post. erotic-amphetimine? I am definitely going to borrow that sometime. Really great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Abhra! Welcome to the lasagna. Please feel free to use "erotic-amphetamine" as often as you like. Thank you for the visit.
DeleteNo, you didn't do it all wrong...you did it all right! Hot...and your Kennings were such great combos...wonderful job.
ReplyDeleteHI Bodirose! Thanks for visiting and commenting.
DeleteWow.
ReplyDeleteNope. Nothing wrong with this at all.
That was so sensual that I'm actually blushing. I didn't want it to end.
Hi Barry! Thank you.
Deleteerotic and playful - a testament to the power of words. Nice
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteAh.. I need ice-water after reading this... Definitely not wrong
ReplyDeleteThank you Bjorn! I really enjoyed the prompt.
DeleteCould feel the heat. Nicely done Heidi!
ReplyDeleteHank
Hi Hank! Thank you!
Deleteoh my goodness...ha... there's some tight energy in this...napalm daylilly-desire...whew...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Claudia!
DeleteWhere does one get voice lessons like that.. cool to be hot.. like it
ReplyDeleteI don't know how he does it, there's just something about him. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteHeidi this is fantastic and inspired and just wow!
ReplyDeleteHi Yves! Thank you!
DeleteThis is great, spot on for the prompt, and wow what a piece!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shanyn!
DeleteYummy luscious-love words!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Hi my most favorite Anna :o] Thank you! Hugs to you!
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