Friday, March 21, 2014

A Man Like That

His voice
               is
 erotic-amphetimine

I n j e c t i n g
                napalm daylilly-desire

E
 r
  a
   d
     i
      c
        a
          t
            i
             n
                g
                         all

logic-vomit

                     Wilting the boldness-bearer
of my resolve.

Burning me with the
                                 ice-blue-fire
of
     his
          gaze.

My body

 trembles 

with well-being
                               and 

the sweet

ache

of time-halting.


All I do is wait for the freedom-flame
                                                         That is the caress of his fiery stare.

heidi
written 3/21/14
for dVerse Meeting the Bar

Bjorn introduces us to Kennings in this Meeting the Bar at dVerse. They look like so much fun, and I think I did it all wrong. Oh well. Happy World Poetry Day anyway! Make sure you go by and check out the other poems using Kennings. You won't regret it!

24 comments:

  1. napalm daylilly-desire

    ha....whew...i need another shower....this is quite hot....
    sweat-ache of time halting....for sure..

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    1. Thanks Brian! I like this poem better after being away and coming back to it.

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  2. Wow, such a brilliant post. erotic-amphetimine? I am definitely going to borrow that sometime. Really great work.

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    1. Hi Abhra! Welcome to the lasagna. Please feel free to use "erotic-amphetamine" as often as you like. Thank you for the visit.

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  3. No, you didn't do it all wrong...you did it all right! Hot...and your Kennings were such great combos...wonderful job.

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    1. HI Bodirose! Thanks for visiting and commenting.

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  4. Wow.

    Nope. Nothing wrong with this at all.

    That was so sensual that I'm actually blushing. I didn't want it to end.

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  5. erotic and playful - a testament to the power of words. Nice

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  6. Ah.. I need ice-water after reading this... Definitely not wrong

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    1. Thank you Bjorn! I really enjoyed the prompt.

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  7. Could feel the heat. Nicely done Heidi!

    Hank

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  8. oh my goodness...ha... there's some tight energy in this...napalm daylilly-desire...whew...

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  9. Where does one get voice lessons like that.. cool to be hot.. like it

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    1. I don't know how he does it, there's just something about him. Thanks for stopping by.

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  10. Heidi this is fantastic and inspired and just wow!

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  11. This is great, spot on for the prompt, and wow what a piece!

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  12. Yummy luscious-love words!
    Anna :o]

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    1. Hi my most favorite Anna :o] Thank you! Hugs to you!

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