Morning
My small
boy hugs me as
we watch Ninja Turtles
little things make him happy and
I'm blessed.
heidi
written 5/11/13
I am having NaPoWriMo withdrawal...
My small
boy hugs me as
we watch Ninja Turtles
little things make him happy and
I'm blessed.
heidi
written 5/11/13
I am having NaPoWriMo withdrawal...
Wow! Still going? Impressive! I'm actually pretty drained, so I'm going to take a week off.
ReplyDeleteAs for the content of your poem, it's a wonderful feeling, isn't it? Is that a particular form similar to tanka/haiku or did you come up with the form on the fly?
Thank you Bizza, and welcome to the lasagna! I think it has become a habit. I had this feeling like I hadn't done something that I was supposed to do this morning that went away after I posted.
DeleteThe feeling that inspired my poem is awesome. My little guy is three and had a perfect smile on his face this morning when he sat next to me.
The form is a cinquain, and has become a favorite of mine. I think I read about it two months ago. It is similar to the haiku form in that you are limited to a number of syllables per line.
2
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6
8
2
I don't think it has content or rhyme restrictions, but I do tend to ignore form rules I don't like :)
Thanks for the visit, and enjoy the break.
Enjoy them and the moments with them. Breathe, enjoy your successes. Quite a month of writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks! It's like I'm sitting in a wagon speeding down a hill hoping that I don't crash at the end.
Deletesmiles...yes you are...kids are so cool...
ReplyDeletei am...they are
DeleteLovely cinquain..yes you are blessed.I am having Napowrimo withdrawals as well:)
ReplyDeletethank you...i didn't think that it would be so hard to stop.
DeleteAwww this is so beautiful! My daughter is beside me on the sofa now watching cartoons
ReplyDeletethank you...i was a cartoon fan before, but watching them has become even better.
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