Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Broken

Like a glass jar
No longer with purpose
Shattered on the
Hard
Cold
Floor.

listen to ‘Broken’ on Audioboo

heidi

9/22/13

So, yeah,  I was more than a little depressed during the month and a half hiatus. (Those of you who follow me on Twitter are saying, "well, duh, Heidi." ) Tweeting damn depressing cinquains, watching cool videos and reading/listening to scary stories seem to help take that razor-sharp edge off of brutal despair, I find.
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7 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 30, 2013 at 8:33 PM

    I really like this. I love the format the emphasis the fall. Also the clear image we get. Thanks for sharing your hurt in a beautiful way. :)

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    1. HeidiNovember 1, 2013 at 1:57 PM

      Thank you Rachelle! Welcome to the lasagna :). I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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  2. Brian MillerOctober 30, 2013 at 9:30 PM

    ouch. this one is rather painful.

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    1. HeidiNovember 1, 2013 at 3:14 PM

      this is one of the ones that I wrote and forgot about and then reread and thought, "damn, I like that" (the poem, not the feeling). It is painful.

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  3. hyperCRYPTICalOctober 31, 2013 at 4:01 AM

    Sad words lovely Heidi, beautifully written.
    Anna :o]

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  4. AnonymousNovember 8, 2013 at 1:58 PM

    Heart-breaking poem Heidi I hope you are feeling better

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