Tuesday, October 29, 2013

Fidelity

My devotion to you
is
  so
    damn
       deep

that I stop myself
in the midst of
a
smokin'
      sex
        dream

 because

he

wasn't

you.


heidi
written: 9/21/13

I am digging into my reserves today. A little poem I wrote while I was gone that month and a half. Thanks for stopping by!
 

14 comments:

  1. well now....that takes some dedication there...ha...
    nice...

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    1. It is a very frustrating dedication. I'm ready to start writing fictional poetry again.

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  2. He should be honored, because that's damned deep.

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    1. Actually, he was a little confused as to why I was so pissed at him. If I have to stop hot imaginary dream sex for him, he can deal with a little irrational anger. That's fair, right?

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  3. I find I wake up whether I want to or not...Damn!
    Anna :o]

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  4. This was pretty good! It is hard to force yourself to write poetry! Keep at it!

    Thanks for your comment on my blog too!

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  5. Great poem, and even greater insight!

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  6. Ooo, this is my favorite yet during the Great Heidi Blog Catchup of 2013.

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    1. Thanks, Bone. The catch up is catching up with me.

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