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heidi
written: 7/9/13
Shared with dVerse OLN 7/9/13
Shared with dVerse OLN 7/9/13
Brian gave us a puzzle prompt in Saturday's Poetics at dVerse. I had a poem that I had written 23 years ago, but, I wanted to write something new, and I couldn't find the old one. This is still a very rough (hahaha) draft, as I want it to be more crosswordy and have a better flow. I attempted ironing it out a little, but I am instead having to admit that not all of the kinks are out of my computer. So. Very. Frustrating.
And I do apologize if this was a little too blue, but I did at least used to warn you that that sort of language could pop up.
Clever, and I've been there too. Cross, indeed!
ReplyDeletethanks! this was one of those that it still looks better in my mind than it does on paper, but the one in my mind is still a little fuzzy on how everything fits.
Deleteha. get it all out of your system...smiles..that is awesome...there are some pretty funny combos in there too...
ReplyDeletesorry on the kinks in the computer...
thanks, i loved the puzzle prompt, although the computer also inspired some of the words in this one ;-)
DeleteWonderful presentation... love crossword puzzles.
ReplyDeleteThank you Laurie! I don't think I have a future as a cruciverbalist, but it was fun.
DeleteDefinitely cross words...I love the cleverness of this, Heidi. Wished I had this about 20-some years ago to send to someone. :0)
ReplyDeleteThank you Victoria! I don't think I would want to meet that someone.
DeleteBrilliant take on Brian's prompt. Cross words indeed ... smiles
ReplyDeleteThank you Tony!
DeleteVery clever. Who rattled your cage? :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Viv! I wasn't really mad, I just love naughty words.
DeleteGotta say that I loved this--clever and daring and spot on
ReplyDeleteThank you Audrey!
DeleteAh, this works. well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you LaTonya! Welcome to the lasagna.
DeleteOoh, this feels cathartic!
ReplyDeleteThat is the power of certain words.
DeleteSo clever!! Glad I'm not the one on the receiving end of this!
ReplyDeleteThanks Robin! I imagine it wouldn't be very nice to get the brunt of this.
DeleteVery cool and clever!
ReplyDeleteThank you Madeleine. I have been working on a limerick for your limerick-off, but it is not cooperating.
DeleteA nine-letter word for brilliant. A six-letter word for clever. A double seven-letter word pair for f----ng aw---me. :)
ReplyDeleteA nine letter word for gratitude!
DeleteLike strands of a beautifyl box jellyfish, only dangerous if you get too close !, but an essential part of nature, humans have been doin it since the cave wall......cussin'
ReplyDeleteoooh, I really like something I wrote being compared to a box jellyfish! I want to see one in real life, but my strong aversion to pain and dieing has kept me from fulfilling that desire. And how much fun is cussin'?
DeleteThis is so clever Heidi love it! Is it wrong that "fuckhead" makes me laugh
ReplyDeleteoh no, i just realized that fuckhead doesn't fit, unless there is a word spelled wordsc...I could probably save su...
ReplyDeleteI also wasn't sure by the comments: is the monostich legible?
ReplyDelete