Friday, February 22, 2013

The Sunday Whirl Submission: At Some Point Later

At Some Point Later

She has exerted more effort and summoned more strength than she knew she had in order to get to this point. She has decided to take a bath and is now sitting on the toilet seat. It cold against her naked skin, and she is staring into the mirror on the back of the door. Why are there so many stupid, fucking mirrors in this house? She listens to the water fill the tub and breathes in the steam.  Heavy limbs are lifted and moved to the water which is too hot and she is held in an embrace that makes her drowsy.  Maybe too quickly, she is asleep.

The man continues his day and works. There are more interactions with people, but he feels like the real him is hiding somewhere under his skin. He is under this man that everyone sees.  At some point he has given birth to a son that wears him like a costume and goes through his day for him.  He wonders how she is doing and thinks he should call her, but he will not. This costume, this mask lacks empathy and he cannot reach her, so he mourns alone while he carries on with his duties.

And here I am again, at the end of another moment, trying to root out a happy ending for my imaginary family. I write by candlelight with my netbook on my lap and the solution to their problem scurries beyond my reach.

Well, there is always next week.
heidi
written 2/19/13
Submitted to The Sunday Whirl

This is my second submission to The Sunday Whirl. It is continuing from last week's submission, One Moment in one Day. It may be interesting to see where this goes with the wordles from The Sunday Whirl. I copied the picture of this week's (almost last week's) words from Wordle 96. If you want to learn more click on the first link above. There are some cool submissions.


 

4 comments:

  1. Hi Ally! Thanks for dropping in. I'm glad you liked it and I'm always happy to see you here. After reading your post, Hidden Readers, the other day, I started to think about how the writing blogs and fashion blogs I follow are more similar than not. Both types of blogs tend to have goals of developing creativity, sharing beauty, and supporting each other. What a cool world we live in (if you'll forgive the preposition.)

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  2. So sad. I wonder why these two weren't together? Part 4? Maybe?!

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    1. I'm not really sure why he wasn't with her...I know that there is going to be a part four, so this is a good question to think about.

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