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Wednesday, April 23, 2014
NaPoWriMo Day Twenty-Three: When We Arrived in Hilo
one afternoon we
watched "Jaws 2" on cable TV
our perfect honeymoon
heidi
written 4/23/14 for
I miss Hilo.
Remember tonight is World Book Night! Have you read Agatha Christie lately? Now would be a good time!
Hi Barry! This is such a sweet memory, too. The irony is that it wasn't Jaws 2. That we watched before we were married on Maui. The movie we watched in Hilo was "The Fog" (the 1980 original).
I just replied to Barry that I misremembered. I read this to my sweetie and he said, "No, we watched the 'The Fog.'" I like it better as Jaws for the poem, though. Poetic license, right?
Ah yeah... it's not in the things we're doing; it's all about the company we keep. I feel ya.
ReplyDeleteHi Barry! This is such a sweet memory, too. The irony is that it wasn't Jaws 2. That we watched before we were married on Maui. The movie we watched in Hilo was "The Fog" (the 1980 original).
Deletetogether....anything is better
ReplyDeletekinda ironic it was jaws though...ha
I just replied to Barry that I misremembered. I read this to my sweetie and he said, "No, we watched the 'The Fog.'" I like it better as Jaws for the poem, though. Poetic license, right?
DeleteOur honeymoon was a truck stop dinner....not romantic, but we were thrilled. Nineteen was easily pleased. ;)
ReplyDeleteSusie that actually sounds really romantic. One of the nice things about nineteen.
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