The Fight
torn like a rag doll
done with your indifference
yell and leave you torn
heidi
written 4/18/13 for
Today's prompt is to begin and end a poem with the same word, and yesterday was National Haiku Poetry Day and I'm tired and grumpy this morning so voila, The Fight. I think that I wrote a senryu, but I'm going to appreciate the inspiration. Have a good day y'all!
torn like a rag doll
done with your indifference
yell and leave you torn
heidi
written 4/18/13 for
Today's prompt is to begin and end a poem with the same word, and yesterday was National Haiku Poetry Day and I'm tired and grumpy this morning so voila, The Fight. I think that I wrote a senryu, but I'm going to appreciate the inspiration. Have a good day y'all!
Applause!! And this fits all the EMT's, people with courage and big hearts who run to the inferno to help...very nice poem by you and your friends;0
ReplyDeleteThank you kkkkaty! I was a social worker and have had the opportunity to work with all kinds of different helping professionals and volunteers. They tend to be some of my favorite people. I also have awesome friends.
DeleteBlogger seems to be a little glitchy and posted your comment under a different poem, so this conversation looks a little funny :).