My Son
Watching
Eli play with
his toys, singing a song
he made up, filling my days with
his light.
heidi
written 4/24/13 for
I went off prompt today. I couldn't find an anagram that I liked. So while I was waiting for something to write this is what I saw. I hope that you like it.
Watching
Eli play with
his toys, singing a song
he made up, filling my days with
his light.
heidi
written 4/24/13 for
I went off prompt today. I couldn't find an anagram that I liked. So while I was waiting for something to write this is what I saw. I hope that you like it.
This is excellent - brief, succinct, economical with language - yet precise, very descriptive and conveying the intended(?) emotion. I think it's lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you. It was one of those moments where I was thinking about what to write when I was distracted by what he was doing. He's three and it was very sweet and this kind of wrote itself.
Deleteso sweet and beautiful. I love listening to a child sing, especially when they don't know you're listening.
ReplyDeleteHe has an eclectic taste in music and likes to make up his own songs which often feature him and are very funny.
DeleteInnocent joy is marvelous to observe, as is a mother's love for her child. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you. He is (usually) joy personified.
DeleteThis is lovely I have a 5 year old daughter myself =)
ReplyDeleteThank you! My sweet girl just turned six and Eli is three. He was in his own world when I wrote this.
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