Blue
Blue
Indigo
Azure
A primary color
the pigment in your eyes
The state of my soul
...now that you're gone.
heidi
written 4/28/13
The prompt for today was to think of a color, it's synonyms and uses and write a poem. Thanks for visiting.
(have y'all noticed my comments have gotten drastically shorter? I think I'm all wrote out....)
Blue
Indigo
Azure
A primary color
the pigment in your eyes
The state of my soul
...now that you're gone.
heidi
written 4/28/13
The prompt for today was to think of a color, it's synonyms and uses and write a poem. Thanks for visiting.
(have y'all noticed my comments have gotten drastically shorter? I think I'm all wrote out....)
soft. draws the reader in. wanting more.
ReplyDeleteThank you Paige.
DeleteVery poignant.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mary.
DeleteBeautiful. Loved the way you flipped the message from one of beauty to one of desolation and vulnerability. The efficient use of language only magnifies the emptiness felt at the end.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Loved the way you flipped the message from one of beauty to one of desolation and vulnerability. The efficient use of language only magnifies the emptiness felt at the end.
ReplyDeleteThank you for both of the comments! I moderate comments for posts older than a month, so I will make sure to respond to them. It doesn't account for when I retweet them. I published both of your comments because they are awesome and I am that vain. I'll take one down if you'd like. Thank you for being so supportive and for your breathtaking poetry.
DeleteI thought I commented here. Let's try again.
ReplyDeleteLoved the way you switched between beauty and emptiness. The economy of language magnifies the desolate vision at the end. Beautiful and melancholy.