Sunday, April 28, 2013

NaPoWriMo Day Twenty-Eight: Blue

Blue

Blue
Indigo
Azure

A primary color
the pigment in your eyes

The state of my soul

...now that you're gone.

heidi
written 4/28/13 

The prompt for today was to think of a color, it's synonyms and uses and write a poem. Thanks for visiting.
(have y'all noticed my comments have gotten drastically shorter? I think I'm all wrote out....)

8 comments:

  1. soft. draws the reader in. wanting more.

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  2. Beautiful. Loved the way you flipped the message from one of beauty to one of desolation and vulnerability. The efficient use of language only magnifies the emptiness felt at the end.

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  3. Beautiful. Loved the way you flipped the message from one of beauty to one of desolation and vulnerability. The efficient use of language only magnifies the emptiness felt at the end.

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    1. Thank you for both of the comments! I moderate comments for posts older than a month, so I will make sure to respond to them. It doesn't account for when I retweet them. I published both of your comments because they are awesome and I am that vain. I'll take one down if you'd like. Thank you for being so supportive and for your breathtaking poetry.

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  4. I thought I commented here. Let's try again.

    Loved the way you switched between beauty and emptiness. The economy of language magnifies the desolate vision at the end. Beautiful and melancholy.

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