Saturday, April 4, 2015

NaPoWriMo Day Four: Without Saying

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Grabbed some Reese's mini cups
They're for you.

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(I'm on a kindle. I'll pretty this up later.) Today's prompt was to write a love poem without using the word love or any cliches. So a Collom Lune. And hey, why hasn't anyone told me before today that I was spelling that wrong? Are we all misspelling it? It's Collom, not Collum. My deepest apologies to Jack Collom, the dad of one of my most favorite forms.
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10 comments:

  1. The BizzaApril 4, 2015 at 11:44 PM

    I like this. And I don't think Jack would mind.

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    1. HeidiApril 5, 2015 at 6:55 PM

      Thanks Barry! Sometimes I think I should send him some sort of fan mail thanking him for his lune.

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  2. BoneApril 5, 2015 at 12:17 AM

    Now that is love.

    And I think he should've named it the Jack Lune.

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    1. HeidiApril 5, 2015 at 6:58 PM

      Peanut butter cups do seem to say "I love you", unless there are peanut allergies. Then they're more of a fuck you kind of thing. Fortunately, Darrell is not allergic to peanut butter.

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  3. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerApril 5, 2015 at 3:18 PM

    One of my favorite kinds of candy!

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    1. HeidiApril 5, 2015 at 6:59 PM

      They are good. I really like the minis too.

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  4. Elizabeth BoquetApril 9, 2015 at 12:22 AM

    Works!

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  5. Ron.April 11, 2015 at 5:27 PM

    Love, simplified.

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