Saturday, April 4, 2015

NaPoWriMo Day Four: Without Saying

Check out lane
Grabbed some Reese's mini cups
They're for you.

written 4/4/15 for


(I'm on a kindle. I'll pretty this up later.) Today's prompt was to write a love poem without using the word love or any cliches. So a Collom Lune. And hey, why hasn't anyone told me before today that I was spelling that wrong? Are we all misspelling it? It's Collom, not Collum. My deepest apologies to Jack Collom, the dad of one of my most favorite forms.


  1. I like this. And I don't think Jack would mind.

    1. Thanks Barry! Sometimes I think I should send him some sort of fan mail thanking him for his lune.

  2. Now that is love.

    And I think he should've named it the Jack Lune.

    1. Peanut butter cups do seem to say "I love you", unless there are peanut allergies. Then they're more of a fuck you kind of thing. Fortunately, Darrell is not allergic to peanut butter.

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    1. They are good. I really like the minis too.


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